STYLE WORKOUT #1 

 

Revise the following sentences 

  

1. There are a lot of students in the classroom. 

  

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2. David got a new computer with a lot more memory. 

  

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3. Marcus and Jill have a wonderful marriage. 

  

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4. A lot of Maples, Aspens, and Cedar trees get cut down every year. 

  

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5. Nick employs quite a bit of strength when he cuts down trees with an 

axe. 

  

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6. I like to go fishing when I get fresh bait from the market. 

  

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7. John F. Kennedy has got an airport named after him, called JFK. 

  

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  8. There is a strong odor coming from the adjacent apartment. 

  

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9. Theodore has a bit of a problem with smoking cessation programs. 

  

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10. Jenny, our new volleyball player, is the tallest member of the team. 

  

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